Lady Seramis

To be fair, critiques are difficult

Whither scene? It may seem archaic, but I prefer to know where something is taking place. Consider, as an opening sentence for a chapter: 

"The morning sky was overcast, but it failed to mute the constant din of activity in the port of Lisbon as Lord De La Warr and the former Marchioness disembarked."

Or:

"As Lord De La Warr and the former Marchioness disembarked, the morning sky was overcast, and failed to mute the constant din of activity in the port of Lisbon."

No, no, no, no.

Lady Seramis Free Preview

The new iPhone app (approval, release and karma pending): Lady Seramis Free Preview needs a home on the Internets, so here it is!I created the app to promote the upcoming release of my new Novel, The Agility of Clouds.More on both to follow...

A sweet suite

I felt the need to add some music to my planned iPhone app. Did I mention I was planning to create an iPhone app?https://soundcloud.com/chris-pitchford-pub-ltd/sets/lady-seramis-suiteThe new book that's in preparation needed some music, apparently.

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